Torso design - seeking for critique
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Nicole Lee
Hello everyone, Below is my torso drawing based on a photo from Watts on Bridgman book. I would love to get your opinion/critique on my design and where to improve. Thank you!
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Jeremiah Rybij
First of all, this is well done. Very well done. The structure and anatomy stand out immediately and the values are well presented. I think that the only way to take this further would be to complete the lower torso. The lumbar is implied, but it feels as though the upper body doesn't have any support.
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Nicole Lee
Thank you @Jeremiah Rybij , I will work more on improving the design!
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eli zur
Hi im new and nowhere your level haha, I would add that the lower back(near the abdominal) seem a bit too thin for the upper side
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eli zur
Sure!:)
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Nicole Lee
Thank you @eli zur !!
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Jessica Walsh
I like this! Such a strong pose. I think what could help would be focusing on the center of gravity.
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Nicole Lee
Thank you @Jessica Walsh
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Jeremias Fritsch
Hey Nicole, thats a really good drawing. I couldnt do that at all. The only thing that I think you should add is the same kind of beautifull shading to the face. You have drawn out the facial features but not shaded it so that area seems unfinnished. The only anatomy part that looks off is his sixpack. Particularily the three packs further away may be too bulgy. You might wanna look at the Abdominal Muscles in general. I think the Pectoral in the front doesnt connect properly to them! Besides that I think your drawing is amazing!
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Nicole Lee
Hi @Jeremias Fritsch thank you so much for your observations and suggestions!
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