This is a great start! As far as things that need a second look, in my opinion, would be 1) the scale of the figures. The girl seems too small. 2) the way the hands lay on his head seem a little unnatural. Take a picture with your hands on someone's head and compare the two 3) the facial features seem a little out of scale. The eyes seem a little big. Good luck and I hope that helps! You're on your way.