Robo bean practice
4yr
Anubhav Saini
Please can anyone critique
My goal with these drawings is to get the structure and gesture of the torso correct
Hi @Anubhav Saini these are nice studies with lots of dynamic poses. One thing I think you can focus on improving is proportions. Note that the front plane of the human body is thicker than the side plane. In the first three photos, the hip box proportions were off as they were drawn as squares. These were corrected for the later photos as they were drawn with narrower side planes. Also the relative size between rib cage and hip boxes was inconsistent across drawings. Try to observe the poses more and practice with proper proportions as much as you can, as the robo bean is important for constructing figures in the future. Hope that helps!
Your drafstmanship is great. I do see you included one of the model pictures, but I don't seem to find a drawing that matches it. I believe structure and gesture can be somewhat opposite of each other. You can definitely study both simultaneously, but it is also important to study them separate. If you could post the model pics with the corresponding drawing side by side I could give more detailed feedback.