Rhino beetle samurai
3yr
ITAI WEINBERG
Just wanted to share, if somebody has feedback that's great too :)
2yr
Hey @ITAI WEINBERG, awesome drawing!
I made some feedback below- mostly about clarifying the silhouette and designing a simple value structure.
Hope its helpful!
3yr
Great work. The only thing for me is I'd say you could work on a clearer silhouette. There's a lot of overlap which confuses the eye. Fill the whole thing in solid black and see if you can still understand the pose.
Hi @ITAI WEINBERG , very cool drawing! Good pose, cool design, very good inking. Just a comment to the sword: This is not a good way to hold a sword. One "failure" is how your character places his hands on the sword handle, because they are too close together. Maybe this is not the sword of your hero? The sword handle seems to be too long too.
Your technical skills are already very strong. So I propose that you are studying more references to get some knowledge "behind the scenes". Most people will not care or notice subtle things like this, but there are always some nerds who will groan ...
ITAI WEINBERG
3yr
Yeah you're correct, thank you for the great feedback! The part I always have trouble with is two handed weapons, because this is when to hands meet.
Happy to say I got a lot better at it
3yr
I love it ! Line quality looks so good. What medium it that? It caught my attention cause I've been practicing inking 😁 Keep it up and keep sharing <3
3yr
Hi thank you!
I used hard tip pens and then I decide which lines to "enhance" with a brush pen.
I do it to make the pose more dynamic, the lines I enhance are usually the ones that are closer to the viewer point of view, and the ones that make the pose more dynamic, like sharp curves.
Hope this helps
