Floss n’ roll
2yr
So I’m back to creating cartoons, and this is the most recent one I’ve done. 😁 Hopefully, there will be more of this kind coming soon.
If you have any thoughts on it, I’d love to know about! Thanks!
I love your cartoon and the style you've done it in. Last week I didn't know what to say about it until @Jesper Axelsson pointed out the visual effect with the mouth being open or closed. Now I see it. I think his addition of teeth would be a great idea. Other than that, great job!
2yr
Glad you enjoyed it, @Christopher Beaven! I really like Jesper’s suggestion too. Thank you for your feedback!
2yr
@Liandro Haha😂👍So funny!
- In the close up of the dentist my brain got a little confused; for a second it read as if his mouth was closed and that the upper lip was the cheek bulging up from the smile. Maybe adding teeth could help clarify the read of an opened mouth.
Cheers!
2yr
Thank you, @Jesper Axelsson! 😄 I see what you mean, it makes sense! I really like the suggestion to add the teeth, it even adds an extra layer of “straight/curve” contrast with the mouth. Thanks a lot for taking the time! 👍🏻
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2yr
Hi @Liandro I would just love to know where your inspiration comes from - your ideas are so different... I just love the contrast between the two expressions on your characters, the guy playing the floss is in a world entirely of his own - it just makes me smile to look at him
2yr
Thanks,@Jo Sheridan! Glad you like it! It’s hard for me to say exactly where this came from, but I was brainstorming ideas under the theme “Odd musicians” and this situation popped in my head. 😁 Although I do have a history of going to the dentist a lot back in childhood, so it’s somewhat a familiar theme… 😆
2yr
Oh crap, I'm never seeing my dentist the same again :'D
Wonderful line flow and courbe dynamics !
