Figure drawing feedback/critique
11d
Kevin Burfield
I recently completed this charcoal drawing. I would love some feedback/tips and advice. Feel free to critique this as hard as possible. I wanna get good.
I like your shading, too. The play of light and shadow is really cool.
Since she is bending forwards, her upper body does seem a bit too long.
Clearly, I don't know your reference, but to me, the butt seems extremely big and it looks very symmetrical. That is what I would want to change.
But overall, I like your drawing very much!
I like your shading work but I feel like there's too much gap between the ribcage and pelvis. Maybe measure it against your reference.