Hey there! I did a drawover to best illustrate the placement for features at this angle. I think part of the issue is that the section for the jaw became larger than average. While the Loomis model does change proportions from person to person, with a feminine/young figure, you'd want to go closer to the average or even smaller. The guideline used for the nose indicated that the side oval plane was also on the smaller side, making the jaw appear even larger. Moving these guidelines resulted in the nose (and consequently the mouth) to move further down, and I also kept them closer to the center line since the head is still mostly facing forward. As for eyes, yours are already pretty close in placement. I know in anime, eyes tend to remain a bit flatter, so stylistically it's up to you, but it's good to practice incorporating perspective nonetheless. For this, it mostly came down to showing the left eye (her right) at more of an angle as the plane of her face rotates away from us. It helps to think about the face as a simplified rounded surface for this. I hope this helps and do let me know if you have further questions.