Critique on Recent Piece
3yr
Elias Lemus
Hi! This is a digital painting I finished recently and would love a critique on it! Technical, compositional, opinion... any form of critique is welcome. All I want is to get better. Thank you.
3yr
Hey Elias,
I like the mood of this piece, and I like the warm against cool colors you have. The main thing with this is the perspective, you must make sure it's applied to the whole drawing. I did a draw over to show you what I mean. But... I also drew another version with more dramatic 3 point perspective and an up shot to show more interest. I thought it would help you think about other perspective views while developing your ideas. I hope this helps :)
Elias Lemus
3yr
Thank you so much! That is some great feedback and some great sketches! I will definitely keep all of that in mind. Thank you.
3yr
Hi Elias! I like the colours you used there:) Maybe you could consider a lower camera angle for this piece? also You could totally use some reflected moonlight to light the face up a little and get some nice expression in there!:) Nice mood!
3yr
I agree with the camera angle, most definitely. Thank you for your feedback. I will definitely put it to use. Thanks!
