Hey Irvin, Nice painting, I like the emotion. I did a draw over to show you some of the things you could do to help the drawing. I think the pose looks kind of odd, I think that his arms should come out toward the camera for a stronger, more powerful pose. Also his head feels pushed down into the torso too much. I also agree with Jan's idea of messing up the hair to give it more drama. I hope my draw over is helpful :)

Hi Irvin Looks good. you sure captured the body type right. The pointing finger of his left hand seems a little off maybe. Don't really know the connan story but wouldn't it make sense for his hair to be more messy too? Idk really.