Rachael Sweeney
Rachael Sweeney
Shelvs Fleurima
Hello this project took me a month to come up with. It’s an underwater gollum protecting the honor of a jelly fish lasso from those helpless romantic humans. Something is off with the final painting, but I don’t know exactly what? Any criticism is welcome.
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Rachael Sweeney
The design work is good. The sketches are clear, and the creature’s silhouette is interesting. Even your illustration is well rendered, but it feels visually cluttered; possibly because everything is rendered at the same level of detail. The composition could be stronger. Try exploring alternate compositions with thumbnails. Really show off that creature design.
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