extreme angles, i dont have enough time to draw today so this looks messy

heres attempt for todayy

im having some trouble with the jaws and i feel like theres something wrong but i cant pinpoint itt but heres my attemptt

i actually started learning the loomis method months ago but not for the sake of making portraits , so now i will try again with the goal of making faces of real peopleee ,im gonna try again tomorrow

todays attemptt

my first try, i had a hard time since im bad at shading especially traditionally. This is basically also my first portrait drawing ,i only learned how to draw the shape of the head which is with loomis method but i haven't practiced the other details of the face. im gonna try again tomorrow.