Juan Manuel Duarte Pallavicini
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matt santos
I've been more confortable drawing straight to ink, and so a lot of times my pencil studies will have flimsy, undecisive lines, because in my head, I know pencil is not permanent. Anyways, here's a few studies. I really liked the one in brown ink - it was my third attempt at that pose. Appreciate any constructive criticism on these!
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Juan Manuel Duarte Pallavicini
You are doing an excellent job in most of these, just avoid detailing specific features. Do more of what you did in the brown ink drawing.
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Lance Brown
I spent the last few weeks practicing 30-second poses (In between practicing drawing beans) and I had a lot of trouble with knowing how to tackle specific poses (Mainly whether I should represent limbs with singular lines or define them with shapes if that makes sense). I feel like I'm slowly progressing but I'm not sure where I stand right now in terms of how well I'm doing. I switched to the overhand drawing form recently, and I was wondering if anyone would be able to help me out with some critique. (Not sure why my printer is cutting off some of the edges of the page)
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Juan Manuel Duarte Pallavicini
You are doing fine. Try to avoid drawing the contour of the torsos, try capturing gestures that move all across the figure rather than individual gestures for each limb and keep working on that overhand drawing.
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@tovato
Does anyone have any advice or good examples for gesture for poses of people facing the camera directly? I have some photos I was trying to use that seem to have some motion/unequal weight distribution between the legs etc, but I'm really having trouble doing the very simple 30 sec gestures/limited line gestures. I keep getting lost how to make the limbs and torso feel connected while focusing on any movement instead of a general contour of the body
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Juan Manuel Duarte Pallavicini
Here is the New Masters Academy playlist of instructors doing timed model drawings as examples of how different people approach the challenge: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL7EWYwaF6E-GiaE31csl_6c8tlifE8Nb5
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@mikeyschwarzenagger
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Juan Manuel Duarte Pallavicini
You need to take better pictures of your drawing. The little I can see does show a simplification of the figures and a good use of fewer lines, but by the quality of the photos is hard to tell.
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@pete22
Hi, just started and would really appreciate critique on these 2 minuters, thank you!
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Juan Manuel Duarte Pallavicini
You are doing great, it seems like you get the idea of leading the eye across the figure with long lines. They aren't perfect yet, in the forth one, for example, I can tell you tried to draw the contour of the torso rather than the gesture, all of them show this same error in some way or another, but even if they are more fluent in some areas, and more stiff and sloppy on others, overall they show a care for flow. Keep practicing, avoid drawing contours, and you will improve. Good luck!
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Krasimira Balusheva
It's my 2 minutes Gesture. I do this exercise in last 5 days and this is one of my tries.
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Juan Manuel Duarte Pallavicini
I can tell at a first glance that you are focusing on delimiting the figure and drawing the contour instead of drawing the movement across the body. I recommend you to forget about showing the shapes of the limbs, but rather capture the movement of them. It's not about making pretty drawings, it's about capturing leading the eye across the figure. Keep this in mind, keep practicing and you'll get there. Good luck!
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@milobuatti
hello! i think ive made some progress on gesture/figure drawing. Any advice would be appreciated. I forgot to take a picture of one of the references
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Juan Manuel Duarte Pallavicini
You are concentrating too much on delimiting the figure and drawing the contour rather than catching the sens of movement and fluidity with big, long and loose lines, and the addition of shadow only increases the errors. You should grasp the movement and overall flow of the figure, not make a pretty drawing. Take Glenn Vilppu as an example and pay close attention to how he describes his own process wile executing: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aOtVUHgJqQk He goes both AROUND and WITH the form, takes particular care on the SENS of flow rather than enclosing and delimiting the figure, instead he leaves spaces open and features undefined, since those distract rather than help with the portrait of flow. Btw, if you are having trouble using long and very precise lines to define the gesture like Stan does, try a more Vilppu, messy, approach. With time you can try to reduce the amount of lines you use and increase the speed of execution. I hope all this information is of use to you. Good luck with process!
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Taylor Bankson
OK. I have had a very hard time with gesture. My gut feeling is these are better than my last post. I know they are not finished and I would appreciate some pointers. This exercise has really done a number on my self esteem and desire to draw. I'd like to move on to something else and come back to this later, if I'm reasonably ready to do so.
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Juan Manuel Duarte Pallavicini
You are concentrating too much on delimiting the figure and drawing the contour rather than catching the sens of movement and fluidity with big, long and loose lines. If you are not at the level to use some few lines to portrait gesture, try drawing gesture on a more loose, messy way, at the end of the day you should grasp the movement and overall flow of the figure, not make a pretty drawing. Take Glenn Vilppu as an example and pay close attention to how he describes his own process wile executing: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aOtVUHgJqQk Messy, and numerous lines, that go ACROSS and ALONG the form on a flow-like SMOOTH sens. Later, as you acquire more skill with the pencil you can try to use fewer and fewer lines, and do the gesture quicker and quicker each time. Also as a bonus. Something that helped me understand the feel of flow in the figure and personally helped me improve my design and gesture, here's a video of John Asaro where he tackles the common issue of the sens of stiffness on figure drawings: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uYmyvgwY10U I hope all this information is of use to you and please let me know if said information helped you improve. Good luck!
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Daniil Pershin
I tried to do this in procreate, because I don’t want draw on paper. When I decided to learn more about shading I’ve not expected that my eggs would be so ugly.
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Juan Manuel Duarte Pallavicini
You are using the wrong tool, pen-like brush preset only for linear drawings, and a more air-brush like brush for shading. Don't use opaque lines to portrait shadows, use a brush that blends and/or has transparency. If you want to know how good a brush is for achieving good rendering, look how easy you can do a 5 values chart (five squares of different tones of gray, where the darkness gradually increases every square) with said brush preset.
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@yeetzi
hiii! starting this course along with the anatomy course :] it's been a while since I've done figure drawing so I hope to learn more! did a lot of 30 sec and 2 min gestures. I think I am struggling with the 30 sec ones because I didn't simplify enough. As for the 2 min gestures, I find myself feeling that I have a lot of time especially after doing the 30 sec gestures, but it leads me to hyper-fix into the specific parts instead of the gesture. I also have a habit of scratchy lines that I hope to drop I also have a problem of making the head too small or legs too long but I don't really know if that's important in gesture right now. Any feedback or tips for the 30sec/2min gestures would be much appreciated!
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Juan Manuel Duarte Pallavicini
Don't worry too much about proportions on the gesture drawing stage, later you will learn to compare body parts and mesure them using the head a the basic unit, right now concentrate on your design and portrait of fluidity across the figure. Good luck!
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@carolinafreitas
==QUESTION==: should I go back to shorter poses and gesture or does it look like going to the robobean is the way to go? --- I have done a few poses after watching the landmarks video. All and all i was trying to maintain a gesture feeling with more observation and structure of the landmarks. These are 2min to 5min poses. I started with beans and pinned some of the landmarks (shoulders, "tie" shaped thing, 10th rib, hips bones, triangle shape on the back, clavicles, omoplate/scapula...) Their color backgrouds are because each color is a different day. I am learning to draw digitally with an old intuos pro, also different time for poses, so the line quality varies a lot. This is a big file (4k) with small things, so clicking on "open original" is better to see the lines. images from line-of-action site
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Juan Manuel Duarte Pallavicini
More gesture, try to achieve a higher sense of fluidity with your line work, practice more quick and long gestural drawings, and as a bonus, I will recommend the following video by John Asaro on the New Masters Academy YouTube channel, where he teach how to avoid the sence of stiffness on the figure: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uYmyvgwY10U I hope this helps you to improve your overall design before going for a full figure drawing!
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@hiflow
My attempt at drawing breasts. I'm aware of the mistakes I'm making I still have a lot of gesture practicing to do.
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Juan Manuel Duarte Pallavicini
Those are ok drawings, the only thing I would advise you is to concentrate more on the three-dimensional aspect of the breast, try adding cross contours and/or shading, less contour linear drawing and more focus on the plane changes. Either way, you are doing well!
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@reanimator
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Hey Everyone. I wanted to learn to draw skulls to better understand the face, but I have no idea how to tackle this thing and when I I tried to draw it things didn't work out too well. If anyone at all could give me feedback on this skull and a method for drawing and better understanding the form, I would be so, so grateful.
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Juan Manuel Duarte Pallavicini
Besides the obvious: studying the fundamentals of basic 3D forms, the other key for the understanding of the human figure is anatomy my dear friend, and more work on observational drawing to aid such studies. Personally I always recommend to complement Stan's Portrait Drawing Fundamentals with some anatomy books. The most complete and well redacted I can think of are "Anatomy For Sculptors" (page 99 on wards) and "Anatomy Of Facial Expression" (the first chapter) by Sandis Kondrats and Uldis Zarins (but any well written book about anatomy for either 3D or 2D artists will suffice). And to aid you in the mental process of coping from reference I highly recommend the Bargue Method as explained by Stephen Bauman on his YouTube Channel. After grasping the basic concepts given by the Bargue Method, and repeating the same copy from diagrams and photos process for each part of the face as an aid to the Proko Portrait Drawin Fundamentals Course you will be able to better understand, recognize and draw the whole head.
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Genie Sanon
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Juan Manuel Duarte Pallavicini
The first one is good, the second one not as much. James Gurney always says that he recommends new artists, who are just starting, to avoid style and concentrate on depicting the natural world as close to real as possible. Your cross-hatching, even though it might be your preferred method for rendering shadows, is interfering with the depiction and understanding of the forms. I will add that, if you want to depict shapes and shadows through cross-hatching, I recommend Alphonso Dunn's videos on YouTube, and also his book "Pen & Ink Drawing: A Simple Guide". I hope this resources help you in your journey.
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Johan Kurniawan
Huh? Isn't this the same as part 1? I'm confused did I miss something :/
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Juan Manuel Duarte Pallavicini
Don't worry, you didn't miss anything, this is like a summary of part 1 but without the technical parts, and focusing about the aesthetics and design of the muscles
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