matt santos
matt santos
Brazil
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@gixorn
Hi! Recently completed this assignment. Would appreciate some feedback.
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matt santos
Hi Kevin. One thing I would point out is that your shapes (especially for the limbs) aren't well defined. Think of them having to look more like a hard plastic tube (or box). Yours right now kinda looks like Play Doh when you roll it out. Sure, it's a cylinder, but it's not a very defined one. Improving your form will also help you draw more dynamic images, and think of stuff as made out of 3d shapes! Hope this helps!
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matt santos
The issue im having with this lesson is that Stan's examples change so much in terms of how he approaches mannequinization... in one he'll do all tubes, and then he'll go almost to an anatomy precision level. I wish there was more of a standard on those.
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Fedor Zinchurin
Done using wax or conte crayons, honestly not sure. A bit of the perspective problems thoe...
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matt santos
Dude I love this! Awesome job!
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@missinglee
I find it difficult because sometimes the poses seem to be exaggerated in Stan's examples, and other times they aren't. There were a few poses I paused and started again because the gesture or proportions were way off. I think I have a tendency to make the boxes too thin and too short. I struggle with the line work looking muddy because I'm not yet used to overhand grip. Would appreciate any other feedback please. Thank you
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matt santos
I think yours look really good - i especially like the twists! Now, the bottom part of the boxes all seem to be placed flat on the ground (with a few exceptions). I would try playing with the rotation of the bottom box a little bit more and give it some more dynamic intention.
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@carlosdavila
What do you think? I feel like I could have simplify it so much
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matt santos
I think they´re really good but yeah, I agree that you could simplify it a bit further, especially the faces. Not saying what you get here is bad (far from it) but if you seek simplification, you could draw the dogs´ heads as just a sphere and a cylinder! BTW, cute dogs!
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Michalina
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matt santos
I like the big ones and would encourage you to draw big whenever you can. With tiny drawings, proportion mistakes will be less noticeable, and you won't be able to get as much feedback from your own drawings. Keep it up!
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matt santos
I've been more confortable drawing straight to ink, and so a lot of times my pencil studies will have flimsy, undecisive lines, because in my head, I know pencil is not permanent. Anyways, here's a few studies. I really liked the one in brown ink - it was my third attempt at that pose. Appreciate any constructive criticism on these!
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rak
Hi everyone! The drawings below are my 8th Drawing Session with Gesture. I don't really know if I have improved or not. I think that my learning has stagnated.
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matt santos
Hey rak! I can see improvement for sure. Especially noticeable because you're doing less details and focusing on fewer lines. One thing you can do is simply copy Stan's drawings. They will guide you and hopefully you'll catch on to a few good habits. Mostly, I would say - try finding one or two strong lines that will give you an overall feel of the figure. A lot of your center lines stop at the crotch, and I think you can challenge yourself by going all out - one line from neck to toe! See ow it goes!
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Karina Kardash
Hi! I will be glad to hear comments =) My drawing from 2019. Now is the time to start studying anatomy again. I want to avoid old mistakes. Help with advice =)
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matt santos
hey Karina, these look good! The one thing that looks more obvious to me here is the neck muscle from the figure most to the right. Seems like you had some trouble getting the right angle for the shoulders, and compensated that by giving the figure a very strong looking neck! Try to look at a skelleton model and think of the position of the main bones, and how they all connect. To be honest, side angles are hard for me on that part of the body as well, because we can't really tell if we're looking at the neck, back muscle or shoulder. Look yourself in the mirror and really pay attention while you pose similarly!
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@aruki
Would like some feedback on a sample of some of my recent gestures, I have been doing other studies and gestures before I started the course so anything to improve on that I may not know about would be appreciated.
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matt santos
I think they look very good! one thing I would challenge you to do is exaggerating the dynamic poses on the second page a bit more. This is hard and, as Stan says, you kinda have to break the rules there, but the end result is a much more interesting figure!
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Sadie Ward
Here's a set of 30 seconds and two minutes. I think I'm struggling to judge how much I can get done in the two minutes. I often finish early and have things I could've spent more time on. Would really love feedback.
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matt santos
Hey Sadie! I thinik "how much" we can do with a limited amount of time often varies, and from my experience (which, btw, is limited) you'll kinda figure it out the more you do these exercises. For example, sometimes I spend way too much time drawing a certain feature on a model, and then I realize I have no time to finish the pose. Then on the next one, I try to draw quicker. Just keep practicing (there are some tools online for timed figure drawing) and you'll get used to it!
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