Need to slow down more and give myself time to check my work before making the darker marks. The explanation on the rotator cuff bumps and bulging areas confused me. Gotta rewatch that.

I linked the wrong side by side... here's the correct one, lol https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z5-a9uQkzac&list=PLv__Ylkfv-XOwBxfTjL2NN9nlj00wnW2_

Usually, storyboards are black and white. Depending on the artist or company, they tend to be rough, so you can quickly iterate while maintaining the tone. I believe Pixar can be a very clean almost finished style of storyboarding compared to others. The mitchells vs the machines kept it very loose. Here's an example: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P6HHpWQv8YI Ohhh, and pixar central on youtube has side by side playlist of their boards vs films. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2BTQRYzNL-E&list=PLv__Ylkfv-XMNYLXB0FI0F93ZywAPHvfg Lastly, check out Taniko Pantoja's YT for his videos on storyboarding and animation in general. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AyDbN1hpFzA Good luck! :D

I plan to redo this with charcoal soon. I'm hoping by the end of this course I'll understand how to draw the more uncommon angles of the head and stop with the cartoon eyes and crooked noses. 😄

I know that they are pretty flawed and they miss the energy proko is showing, Feedback on why would be greatly appreciated!