Eddie Williams
Eddie Williams
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Eddie Williams
Hello again, I was in the middle of moving last time, so I decided to shake off the rust before continuing with the course and trying this assignment again. so.....ive spent bout an hour, used 3 pencils this time with HB, B, and 4 B. so..... yeah I feel like its bit messy and I would love to hear the feedback off this again. since I spent over 3 months without drawing I'm just wanting to see what to do from here. In advance, thank you for the feedback. PS. I was made aware by my friends that I only use my wrists when I draw and not my arm, so I'm starting to learn how to use my arm, it's a bit awkward
Eddie Williams
I can't lie I probably overthink it and as a result overcomplicated it, there were so many times where I had to fight and put in curves and putting in soft shading. I think some of them might have sunk into if that's the case. There is also the possibility that I rushed it since I did it under or around an hour. On a side note I've been drawing for the majority of my life freely but for the last three years I've been taking a lot more seriously even crossing over into digital art. but mostly self taught so there is a lot that I dont know and struggle with. any feedback or help is appreciated, and thank you.
Martha Muniz
Hey there and welcome! I think it looks pretty good! Though the value differences are clear (which is great), perhaps you can try deepening the darker side of the value scale to get a fuller range overall, as it appears rather light overall. It'd be a good place to practice getting comfortable toning, by layering with your pencil more to achieve the darker values or using a softer pencil grade. Plus, it'd be a quick way to get more dimensionality into your already great pear. Keep up the good work and keep going! :)
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