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inProko Challenge Monstober - FINAL SUBMISSIONS HERE
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my entry for this months proko challenge
Demon prince charging into battle.
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These are really rad! The design and draftsmanship reminds me of the concept pieces for Studio Ghibli movies. As far as a critique, I'd say maybe push some more line and edge variety to help things stand out more. Right now there are a lot of cool interesting things going on the paintings. Try to push a hierarchy to these as to what's most important in the painting, and make design choices that will help get this hierarchy to work.
2mo
Thanks for the critique, ill try to incorporate your suggestions🙏.
I'm glad it reminds people of Studio Ghibli, in a way I'm trying to create something that brings a similar vibe across. So I guess I was somewhat successful with my work :p
OH Wow you must have so much patience! Do you post this project anywhere available online? Would love to know more about it!
Speaking of critique... the most impression I have among these pieces is probably white "show through" are probably a little too much, like the ground area in the first image. But that depends on the style you are looking to achieve, and watercolour do let a lot of white show through.
2mo
Well I use Instagram, I don’t use it that much though (jonas._.draws on instagram). Regarding the white spots, some are intentionally left to leave the impressions of reflecting light, and some are just unfinished areas. Ill post an updated foto of this peace, have to say though that it’s still not finished yet.
i love all of these very much 😉✌ and i would love to see more like it.
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Wonderful stuff. You have a way with materials and composition that I really love. (Clouds look pretty good to!)
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Water Color paintings (comic)2mo
A couple of paintings, some finished, and some are still a work in progress.
critiques are welcome 🙏.
I think your composition and technique/texturing is wonderful! I get a strong Moebius vibe!
Seriously, you should be doing this (comics) professionally.
4mo
Thank you👍. Well I’m already working on a bigger project, though it does not pay me yet.
oh my god! these are so amazing! . i love all of these. and the fact that you did all of them with a pen makes them even better. this is the kind of stuff that i could only wish to do growing up seriously you are so good keep it up man ✌😉
Love your art! Im not sure maybe think about line variation? Looks awesome though!
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Ballpoint pen sketching. Looking for feedback.4mo
A couple of pages that I filled during work.
