Ballpoint pen sketching. Looking for feedback.
3yr
Jonas Wenzel
A couple of pages that I filled during work.
2yr
I like your artistic style. I like artists who draw with ballpoint pens since it is, in my opinion, more challenging than drawing with crayons or pencils. I'm looking forward to seeing more of your work. Thanks - https://cupcake-2048.com
squeen
2yr
I very much love your stuff! The faces are looking great and your tech is wonderful.
But that poor petite gal has got some big thighs! Remember, the hips force the outside of the leg out only at the top (in two steps from the top of the pelvis to the hip-bone), but the inner thighs are much straighter.
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2yr
I like your character and costume dseign(the gas mask guys are very cool).If I have to give feedback,is that I your linework feel very repetitive,there's not enough variation of thick lines and thins (If possible I would recommend investing in thicker pen or even a cheap brush pen to experiment with,then try to experiment and copy ink master you enjoy)
Of course everything here could be ignored if you were to either A.enjoy this kinda scratchy linework or B.You were to do what moebius does and let the watercolor fill in some of the information for you
2yr
Hey thanks. True, didnt use the ink brush for quite some time now. Iβll give it a try ππ
2yr
I was flipping through your album this morning a realized something that might help you. Your faces sometimes look flat, especially in profile. I think you might want to try emphasizing the brow a bit more (on the men). Give it a try?
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Mobius is that you ? so incredible love it all i love ball pen drawings already , and this takes it one step farther
2yr
Cool pages, @Jonas Wenzel, and really good line economy doing all this with just a ballpoint pen! If youβd like feedback with anything specific, feel free to let me know, but, overall, these look great! ππ»
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2yr
Nice work Jonas. Do I detect an influence of Moebius?
3yr
I think your composition and technique/texturing is wonderful! I get a strong Moebius vibe!
Seriously, you should be doing this (comics) professionally.
3yr
Thank youπ. Well Iβm already working on a bigger project, though it does not pay me yet.
3yr
oh my god! these are so amazing! . i love all of these. and the fact that you did all of them with a pen makes them even better. this is the kind of stuff that i could only wish to do growing up seriously you are so good keep it up man βπ
