Ballpoint pen sketching. Looking for feedback.
5yr
Jonas Wenzel
A couple of pages that I filled during work.
I like your artistic style. I like artists who draw with ballpoint pens since it is, in my opinion, more challenging than drawing with crayons or pencils. I'm looking forward to seeing more of your work. Thanks - https://cupcake-2048.com
I very much love your stuff! The faces are looking great and your tech is wonderful.
But that poor petite gal has got some big thighs! Remember, the hips force the outside of the leg out only at the top (in two steps from the top of the pelvis to the hip-bone), but the inner thighs are much straighter.
I like your character and costume dseign(the gas mask guys are very cool).If I have to give feedback,is that I your linework feel very repetitive,there's not enough variation of thick lines and thins (If possible I would recommend investing in thicker pen or even a cheap brush pen to experiment with,then try to experiment and copy ink master you enjoy)
Of course everything here could be ignored if you were to either A.enjoy this kinda scratchy linework or B.You were to do what moebius does and let the watercolor fill in some of the information for you
Hey thanks. True, didnt use the ink brush for quite some time now. I’ll give it a try 😎👍
I was flipping through your album this morning a realized something that might help you. Your faces sometimes look flat, especially in profile. I think you might want to try emphasizing the brow a bit more (on the men). Give it a try?
Yooooooooooooo this shit is so SICK I am ALL for it man
Mobius is that you ? so incredible love it all i love ball pen drawings already , and this takes it one step farther
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4yr
Cool pages, @Jonas Wenzel, and really good line economy doing all this with just a ballpoint pen! If you’d like feedback with anything specific, feel free to let me know, but, overall, these look great! 🙌🏻
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Nice work Jonas. Do I detect an influence of Moebius?
I think your composition and technique/texturing is wonderful! I get a strong Moebius vibe!
Seriously, you should be doing this (comics) professionally.
Thank you👍. Well I’m already working on a bigger project, though it does not pay me yet.
oh my god! these are so amazing! . i love all of these. and the fact that you did all of them with a pen makes them even better. this is the kind of stuff that i could only wish to do growing up seriously you are so good keep it up man ✌😉
Love your art! Im not sure maybe think about line variation? Looks awesome though!
