Elias Lemus
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Great work! Overall they're looking great. Some tips for improvement:
1. Gesture. I think most of the pieces could use a little more movement. Especially Elvis. He seems a little stiff.
2. What do you want the viewer to see and how can you guide the eye there? You can use value contrast, varied edges, colors, etc. Look at portraits by Rembrandt. Notice how the face is always the most rendered and detailed. Some of his hands are fuzzy or just "implied". Don't make EVERYTHING important.
3. Brushwork. Your brushwork is great, but in some pieces it's the same everywhere. You want to treat different materials differently sometimes. You want skin to feel like skin. Fur to feel like fur.
Hope that helps. Great work, keep it up!
Alexey Skliar
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Thx a lot for thoughtful and lengthy feedback.
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Feedback on portraits.1yr
Need feedback on proportions and on finishing touches. Which one of them can be considered finished. I know they all in different styles but maybe they have some common mistakes etc. Any feedback is welcomed!
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Hey Alexey,
These are pretty cool, you have some interesting character designs here. I wanted to show you some things that might help your designs a little.
First of all, make sure your figures are solid and in perspective. Make sure to always start with a gesture drawing first, your poses tend to be a bit stiff, especially in the limbs.
Make sure the clothing and costume are also reflecting some gesture too if it calls for it.
I did some draw overs to show you what I mean, I hope they helps :)
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Great feedback! They def too stiff and i never start with gesture which i should do more. I mean i neverdo gesture drawing which shows) Great feedback Steve as always. Also downloaded recently bunch of gesture references but havent done em couse its too boring but got to do the boring stuff to improve. What about this is gesture any good?
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Some random character designs,1yr
Just practicing creating charaters with intresting shapes and design and material rendering , Also photobashed background on some of them. Tell me if there are any intresting once if any.
Hey Alexey,
I like that your doing these, I have seen this guys stuff on Instagram too. I will say that the old guy in the cowboy hat is your best. The other ones though suffer from the random brushstrokes that you use to lay down your color. It's good to have expressive brushstrokes, but they should still be describing the form and have a unified look to them. If not, it confuses the observer because its hard to see the form.
I did a quick and dirty paint over your first image to show you how you can unify your values a little to help describe form better. I hope this helps :)
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Hi Steve thx a lot for feedback. Yea the form isn't described well you are right. Was mostly focusing on likeness and didnt described form that well thats for sure.
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I got zero feedback) But I like the illustration. What's the story behind it?
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I love earths world!! It is so useful to find great and interesting references. Another place I like to go is a website called line of action. They have all kinds of references for people and even hands and feet too. It’s definitely worth checking out if you haven’t been on there before.
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Hi Hudson! indeed earthsworld is great. Thx for the suggestion, never been to this web site. Gonna definitely check it out.
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Some sketches of random ppl from the fair.1yr
I found this amazing instagram account (@earthsworld) with great shots of human heads, with amazing lightning and expressions. If anyone knows any other sources of great references to practice i would apriciate if you share.
Also feedback is welcomed.
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Looking great! Drawing containers can be very hard to get all the subtle curves, ellipses, etc... And you accomplished it really well. the only think that looked kinda off were the peaches. Their softness isn't matching the loose brushwork over the rest of the painting. Other than that, fantastic! Keep it up!
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Thx for feedback Christopher! Yep defenetly i went too hard edge on peaches thx for pointing out!
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Hi persona937. I think its well polished work. If your goal was to make well polished picture i think u achived it. When i draw i try to focus more on repition, focus on volume of drawings. It better to do like 30 drawings in a month then do 1 well polished. But again if you wanted to make well polished pic you did it. I was drawing still life recently also you can check them i made a post in this section. They are not that poished but they took like 1-3 hours. Idk if it's helpfull i am also learning like you)
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Still life2yr
Did some still life drawings just wanted to share. These are like 1-3 hours drawings. Any feedback is welcome.
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Great studies! How long did each take you?
Economy of brush work is so difficult. It takes a ton of focus and knowledge of form. The artists that I've studied for this has been Joaquín Sorolla and John Singer Sargent. But if you want earlier I would go with Franz Hals as well.
The essential improvement I can see with your work is getting a deeper understanding of form. What I mean by this is knowing in your head exactly how the body of the horse flows through space so well that you could rotate the horse in any angle and draw it. Of course you don't have to be that good... Like Kim Jung Gi.... but a better understanding will help you render the light on the forms.
I point this out because most of the forms in these painting appear flat. They don't have the full illusion of depth they could have. If you want to improve your perception of form I would suggest Drawabox.com lessons. Marco Bucci has a wonderful course called Understanding and Painting the Head that is great as well. And of course Proko manichenization. (which I never spell right)
Hope that helps! Keep up all the hard work!!! Very inspiring, I need to paint more!
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Thank you Christopher for feedback! As always very valuable. These drawings took around 4-6 hours, last one took the longest couse it's multiple figures. Yea I need to work on the form more. Mostly when doing studies I try to focus on likeness,color and brushwork, idk if that's the right way to go about it. Thank you for artists recommendations.
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I think that they look quite painterly. You honestly could have fooled me into thinking these were traditional. The only flaw I can really see is that in the third painting, the sides of the roofs form a tangent, which makes the picture's depth less distinct.
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Velázquez studies2yr
Tried to challenge myself to draw a study of Velázquez a day for a week. Was very fun and intersting experience. Besides the fact that drawing Velázquez is like eating a delicious candy you can't really get enough, i guess the main takeaway from the experience is that instead of doing 100 brushstrokes its better to do 10 but in the right place and its gonna look more realistic. Also the light and shadow is very clear wich makes forms more readable, If anyone studied Velazqquez or any other classical painter i would like to hear what you've learned from it. Also any feedback on the studies is welcome.
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These are very nice! I recognize those paintings as well. Did you use the zorn palette as well?
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Hi Christopher! Yep tried to use zorn pallette on the first picture, on others just used photoshop color wheel.
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They look very painterly! I also like how you did the loose skin on the middle guys face, shows the form well but doesn’t draw attention away from the eyes and nose
Hi juan . I think as an illustration it looks preaty good. I agree with previous guys about composition and separation but its minor things overall the picture looks solid.
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Zorn studies2yr
Did somewhat quick Zorn studies recently just wanted to share. Although its digital trying to make it look painterly. Any feedback is wellcome.
One more subission for the challenge. Was a beautiful day yesterday in moscow couldn't resist but to draw the view.
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