WIP Portrait
3yr
Marco Fornaciari
I am once again asking for your help :D
I'm doing a portrait right now and it's at a pretty good development stage but i'd like some fresh opinion on it and all the ideas you can give me.
Thanks! ♥
3yr
I like it very much (especially the choice of brushes!).
Maybe I'd avoid those single strands of hair on her face. especially the one on the eye and the one on the lips, and reflect some of the light that hits the face in that purple shadowy area near the neck.
3yr
Lookks really nice!
Marco Fornaciari
3yr
Thanks! I also saw what you posted and those drawing are amazing! Are you a Sergio Toppi lover? They remind me a lot of his stuff.
3yr
It's a drawing full of atmosphere... I love it!
The only little thing that I can find is about the shadow of the hair on the left side of the face: I loke it, but at the same time I think that is maybe a little too dark, at least in the section near the nose.
And I don't know if I like the black outline of the "window" so much, but here it's more a matter of taste.
However it's "wow"
3yr
Thanks! Yes i agree, i was also thinking something else for the outline. I'll change the color for sure but maybe i'll end up chaning the border style completely. It's the first time I'm doing something similar and i've not really a clear idea of what could be good.
I'll try to play with the shadows a bit and see what's the best end result.
Thanks for the feedback!
3yr
Looks amazing! Those colours work really well. The only thing I could say is that her second nostril would be possibly more visible from this angle? Looks amazing tho!:)
3yr
Thank you so much, I honestly have no idea, maybe it should be a bit darker and refined in some area. I'll try that!
