I think you did this quite accurately. the head-on/tail-on view of things are typically weird, like that dog, seems tilted, maybe a change of placement could make it better. Notice the feet position for that purple character beside the dog, it also has that tilted look, as if you really put them like that spatially, they will be nearly a meter apart in depth direction. that axis is compressed. But again, it's not very easy to depict this kind of thing in a head-on angle and not look weird. Overall the view height is well managed so I'd say it's a success

Hey, @Charline B.R.! Sorry to be catching up with your post a bunch of days behind, hope I’m still on time to help. The way I see it, this is turning out to be a nice comp! At first glance, the magical-like environment strikes to me as an inviting idea, and the drawing seems pretty developed at this point, enough to hint that this can become an appealing illustration once it’s finished. So, overall, I’d say great work so far! One technical thing I notice is that the characters’ feet (especially the ones in front) don’t seem to match the same perspective of the ground, so a little adjustment there could make for a noticeable difference already. Look for that simplified box as the main primary form to get the sense of how to firmly place the feet on the ground in perspective. Another thing that caught my eye is that perhaps the architecture might be looking a bit “conceptually unbalanced” for the context: the gate and towers far back, which are a public construction and a military protection device of sorts, seem to have about the same height as the citizen houses, which are often much smaller in this kind of environment. Making the towers and gate taller and more monumental might help not only establish a more believable sense of scale, but also convey a feeling of things being a little more cluttered and crowded, which can make more sense for this type of village (more so than wide open and spaced out anyway). I think that’s all I’ve got right now. I’m sorry you’ve been going through a rough patch lately, but things come in cycles, so eventually you’ll get the drive back. And don’t worry, good work takes time to be done - sometimes, other things get in the way and we need to put projects on hold for a while, it’s just part of the game. Also, I’d definitely say you don’t need to apologize for sharing a work in progress - most of us here are used to seeing unfinished work, so it’s not like we have the pressure to just share pleasing "eye-candy" art here as it’s so common in traditional social media - on the contrary. This community is meant to let us help each other grow, so everyone who needs help with their art is welcome, even if the work is completely rough or amateurish (which isn't your case by any means, of course). Hope this helps, and please let me know if you have any questions. Best of luck!