This is gorgeous, @Rubén Frutos! Lovely concept, great scene. I feel like the color choices really match the idea described in the brief. Very assertive value design too. I see @Steve Lenze already gave you some precious help - I like this new version better too! Great job! I understand your goal was to design a keyframe, but I see a few character related things which I believe I’d spend some more time on - since you asked for feedback, and this is supposed to be a character-focused shot, I figured you might like me to mention: . The pose of the bear. To me, it feels a bit like he’s lifting his paw, but is standing still on the same spot (like a “fake walk”) - I think I’d go after some reference to make it look like he’s in an active forward motion, walking or maybe even slightly running. . The girl’s facial expression. Since the story is about the beginning of a big adventure, I imagine it would be nice to make her look a lot more excited and happy, maybe with wide open eyes, a hopeful and confident smile showing through. I think I’d also change her body language to match this excitement, perhaps push her torso forward, tense up her legs just a little, pull her hands a bit upward closer to her heart? That’s it - hope it helps. Best regards!

Honestly I like the original one better, sorry :p