Hi everyone I worked on this for on and off for far too long and I can't see clearly anymore. I'm sure a lot of things are off but I guess I don't have enough knowledge to fix them. This is part of a personal project. He is a member of the Holy Legion who protect the city and kingdom. The Holy Legion are loved by the people. Edmund is a 33 year old commander who just came back from a patrol (where a battle took place) and is welcomed by the people with love. He waves at them as he enters the city. Any tips and thoughts are welcome! Thank you