Pls give me feedback on Rosé's gesture ^^
2yr
Lien Hoa
I tried to exaggerate her legs so she'll have longer legs lol,
but i kinda feel like the pose is too stiff and i'm not sure how to fix, so a paint over would be very much appreciated !
i've also attached the reference, Rosé is the redhead girl ((? well not actually a redhead right, more like red-brown haired girl)
Thank you!!
2yr
Steve basically provided the best possible advice and I can't really add anything to it other than I really like how you drew her face and her dress. It looks really really nice.
Lien Hoa
2yr
awwww thank you so much, this made me so happy *sob*
2yr
Hey Lien,
Really nice job on this. To be honest, I kind of like the pose you have, it has a lot of attitude. The stiffness comes from not using any gesture in the pose. You use all straight lines to describe everything. Even the skirt is straight across. I did a quick sketch to show you what I mean, I hope it helps. Like I said you could still use your pose, just add some gesture to it.
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2yr
Hi Lien, maybe try tilting her shoulders in the opposite direction of her hips? Right now they seem to both be tilting the same direction and she looks a bit off balance because of that? Nice drawing, by the way.
Cheers!
