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@passerbyeee

I feel that something is off about this but i can't point it out.

Caeona Murdoch

3yr

Hmmm I think it's the yellow on the skin is too close to the yellow in the hair

@passerbyeee

3yr

Thank you for the reply. You're right, i just noticed that now that you pointed it out.

molambird

3yr

the first thing which pops out are the highlight "windows" on her hair. doesnt make much sense when you look at the shadow direction. piece itself is still work in progress, right?

@passerbyeee

3yr

Thanks for pointing that out. Yes, it's still in progress, i don't really know how to finish it.