Oil Painting Pieces to Feedback/Critique
3yr
Talal Zulfiqar
I wanted to see what you guys have to say. Any feedback including critiques welcome!
3yr
Wooo the sharp shadow in the third one really catches my eyes :D
The value and the colour looks alright to me. Maybe in the 1st and 4th one, the occlusion isn't strong enough (under the fruits and the plate and on the table?), so it gives an appearance that some parts are actually floating? But this is hard to get pin point right... I think it's pretty nicely done.
Talal Zulfiqar
3yr
Thanks for your feedback, and I totally get your point. Those fruits could use a darker occlusion shadow, especially the 4th one. Thanks again :D
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3yr
They're really good Talal! The only thing I can point out is the table on the piece with the watermelon. It seems not to follow perspective? Great job!:)
3yr
Thank you! And yes, the photograph i used to paint it was not shot very well as it had lens distortion (the camera was too close) and so the table was actually painted faithfully (may be i did mess it up even then) and so it looks off in perspective.