Naval officer design critique
4yr
Hampus
Hello!
This is an attempt I'm working on at designing a heroic naval officer character. I'm going for an exaggerated slimmed down body style with somewhat elongated legs, but otherwise realistic proportions. (Something proportionally similar to this: https://www.artstation.com/artwork/9eXNGo).
I'm mainly looking for feedback on these things:
- How is the overall read?
- What (if anything) strikes you as interesting, and what is boring?
- Is there too much or too little going on with the costume design?
- Do you think the materials are clearly communicated?
- Does the anatomy look reasonable or does something feel off?
- Is the perspective OK or broken?
If you spot something else I would also appreciate it if you told me! Or better, scribble a bit on the painting. Rendering tips are also very welcome. Actually all tips are welcome :)
Have a nice day!
