An approx 1 hr practice.... What is going wrong in this? Can you please help me !!
Here are a few thing I noticed, but in general, this is a nice sketch considering its size and time spent.
I loved the art as a whole, I can visualize emotions in it, even though it is very good, as your request was for criticism, the only thing that caught my attention was the face, looking at the region of the nose, because according to the angle of the head I believe you could have projected it slightly more out of the edge of the face, if only a little, because as in the part of the body the fabric of the clothes brings a lot of movement, I get this feeling of a straighter face when I look exclusively at him, but this may have been on purpose. I hope I had the ability to help in some way, your drawing was amazing 🙂
You caught me!! the nose do look odd now... I will try fix it.. Thank you..
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I still see this as a quick sketch and sketches always need refinement. You mentioned the nose so a took a second look and I agree with you. I also noticed something off about the ear. When I first saw the picture I thought it looked like an earring but now I'm not sure, So I want to compliment you on your good eye @Real Jr I didn't notice these at first. I edited the photo to show what I mean by it being a lighting/shading thing. My apologies @RItesh Dhande. When I edited your drawing I darkened the part of her hair like it was a hood...woops. I was only trying to adjust the shading on the nose and ear or earring. I thought keeping it dark behind the face would help but completely forgot it was supposed to be a few strands of hair hanging rather than the outline of a hood hahah oh well. Real Jr, you mention projecting the nose out more. I think you're on to something but instead of moving the tip of the nose I brought the bridge of the nose in more. Then adjusted the way the shade and light form the tip of the nose. I did have to drop the side of the nostril down. Also brightened the light side of the face over all and darkened the dark side of the face. Then adjusted the way the light hit that plane where the cheek meets the nose. If what I thought of as an earring is actually the ear then yeah the ear is way too low. Same with the nose being slanted up. I think what's happening is the wonky shading making it look like the nose is tilted up. And that's actually an earring. When I look at RItesh's picture I see someone who has a good grasp of anatomy and proportion over all. I mean, just look at those hands. The way the clothes drape. RItesh has skills.
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looks beautiful. What do you think is wrong? If I wanted to nit pick, which I don't really, I would say the lighting is a bit inconsistent but its a quick sketch if I were you I wouldn't worry about that at all.