looking for feedback (tria for artwork)
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emrecan akyolcu
hi, guys ı am an architect who tries to make unique artwork, my inspirations are mostly concept art(that's why ı am writing here ) and contemporary art mediums.ı am using parametric models and try to convert them into a visual art form. Please give me some feedback cause ım stuck :)
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Steve Lenze
Hey Emrecan, I'm not an architect but I thought I would show you what I would do with this image. I would add a foreground, middleground and background element to show some depth. Also, the structure is done with hard edges, that makes it come forward visually. Everything else is handles with soft edges which pushes them back. I would also move my horizon line up instead of having it cut the image in half. I hope this was helpful to you :)
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emrecan akyolcu
thank you ,steve this realy helpful.It was kind of idea sketch but ı will definitely consider what you say :)
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Dominik Zeillinger
Hi @emrecan akyolcu your picture looks interesting. I like the colors for sure and it feels like there is some kind of story. I do not understand, what you mean with "I am stuck". What kind of feedback are you looking for? Looking at your picture I thougt there is a figure in the middle of the lower half. Is it batman? And the structure in the upper half left hoovering over the "building" could be a giant head?
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emrecan akyolcu
thank you so much dominik .Actually ı was little bit overthinking and mixing some different things together but after this feedbacks ı understand where ı stuck.Thank you again :)
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