Looking for critique again..
3yr
Jo Edgehill
Hi! I'm just looking for any kind of critique on this old drawing , because I would like to redraw it. Thank you!!
3yr
Hey Jo, it's me again :)
I like the attitude of this pose and facial expression, nice. The pose is a little stiff, you will see in my drawing that you are using straight lines. All I did was tilt the head, torso and left leg a little to add some curve to the pose. Hope it's helpful :)
Jo Edgehill
3yr
Hi again,Mr Lenze!
Thank you as always for helping me out with my drawings ,I appreciate it more than you know. Your advice is always so helpful! I'll be looking forward to your insight on my next drawing! :)
Hey @Jo Edgehill , nice drawing, the gesture is really good! One thing I think might help is to define a little bit better the shadows. You could add some contrast to it and also use it to better show the forms of the body and the clothing of your character.
3yr
Thank you for your critique! I'll make sure to remember that when I start over.. thanks again!! :)
