Linework and Anatomical Accuracy
3mo
@akif
Need some feedback on the linework and anatomical accuracy, thanks in advance.
3mo
Some things I've realized while staring at this for hours:
1. The gesture of the arm is completely off. This is supposed to be a relaxed pose of the whole arm, so the forearm should have a 30-45° tilt to the left.
2. The wrist is completely wrong (has no 3D aspect to it), even though I know the wrist has a rectangle shape to it I still managed to mess it up.
3. I don't know why the tricep is looking so gigantic even though I checked its proportion compared to the bicep.
4. I guess I should've used a box shape for the upper arm before putting in the muscles. Just so that it has a 3D feel to it.
5. Of course the muscle shapes and " line movement" are a bit off as well.
These are the things I can see for now, and needless to say any additional feedback would be great!
Thanks once again.
Danet
3mo
Hi
Just a quick note on your own feedback. I feel you’re so hard on yourself. Here is something you can try which might help. Make your feedback a preparation for your next iteration (draw it again and again by the way don’t just stare at it for hours lol)
for example, instead of:
2-The wrist is completely wrong (has no 3D aspect to it), even though I know the wrist has a rectangle shape to it I still managed to mess it up.
simply write this:
2-Make the wrist more dimensional, use a rectangle.
Your feedback on 4 is much better. Much kinder and useful.
Another thing, when you ask for feedback it is useful to add the reference you used, so we can check. Unless this is from imagination of course. If it is, I would try to use reference first.
Hope this helps
Dani
