Landscapes
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Miguel Nieto
Some landscapes I made for study. I would apreciate some feedback
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Peter Anton
Feels too contrasty. I'd say try to control your values more, since right now you've got a lot of darkdarks right up against lightlights, and so the eye just goes everywhere. Tyler Edlin has a lot of good Youtube vids on landscape design
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Miguel Nieto
thanks, I will watch them
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Yiming Wu
I actually quite like your pointy shapes there. If you apply more rhythm to them I think there can be wonderful result
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Miguel Nieto
Thanks, have you got any tutorial or book about rythm?? Because everything I found is pretty abstract
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Chris Bodary
Hey Miguel.these look epic! From life or photo or imagination? Just curious. I do notice one thing in the photo on the right. The path that winds away has some perspective issues unless perhaps i have your horizon line in the wrong spot. Every time the path changes directions they should go to a new vanishing point. I tried to markup the photo with my fat fingers on my iPhone so it’s a bit sloppy. Sorry bout that. The clouds and gesture of the mountains are great. Good stuff.
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Miguel Nieto
Oh thanks Chris, they are color studies from photo. I didnt knew about the perspective and the paths, but that really make sense thanks!
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Stan Prokopenko
Try to get a bigger separation of foreground, middleground, and background. For example in the first one, the shapes in the grass, mountains and clouds look very similar. They have the same level of complexity and value range. They all fight for attention.
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Miguel Nieto
THANKS. I didnt thougt about use the shapes for sepparate the background. It realy helped!
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