Figure drawing critique needed
2yr

ikencu2021
Hi! Can you please critique this drawing?
2yr
Hey ikencu2021,
I like your drawing, its got great gesture. What I'm noticing is that your figure is lacking in anatomy, which has been mentioned already. There are also some proportion problems, especially the head and arm. I'm not familiar with the reference that you used, but I feel like you could add some movement to the hair as well. Also there is a major twist going on, and your missing opportunity to show it. I did a quick sketch of your drawing the way I think it should look based on my experience. I hope you find it helpful :)

ikencu2021
2yr
Steve,
Thank you so much. The information you have provided is very valuable, and I'll keep it in mind ahead of my next figure drawing.
2yr
Nice pose and design of shadows. If it were mine, I'd just make that left ankle and left forearm a bit thinner and define the toe shape a bit on the right foot.
2yr
wow that looks awesome, i dont have much to say im new with gesture too and yours looks stunning.
2yr
Thanks! I've actually tried practicing figure drawing for a while now using Michael Hampton's book