Shaded two eggs after watching Dorian Iten’s shading video. After doing the first one (top left), I felt that the mid tone was too dirty and dark. That forced me darken the core shadow and bounced light region. I felt I like I was overworking it. The second one went a little smoother and I consciously tried to avoid making the mid tone too dark. But now that I look at it, maybe the mid tone isn’t dark enough?? I also looked at Dorian‘s drawing afterwards and found that his core shadow shape is much more sophisticated and communicates more form. What do you guys think?