First thing that comes to mind is to add more hard edges to imply more structure as I feel it's a bit blurry. I suggest doing studies with 2 values and just hard edges to understand shapes better, If you can make something read with just that then I think you're on the right path. I think @Sinix just released a video on that.

Hi Ritesh, for one hour spent, it actually looks pretty good. From what I can see, your proportions are in the ball park. However there are a few things I noticed: - Your painting looks a little washed out. In order to make it pop, you could use some hard contour lines in a few places, not neccessarily everywhere. - In colour is way more diffcult to distinguish the shadow side from the light side, in my opinion. Try to make it a little clearer. Otherwise it seems a bit "muddy". - Following @Gabriel Kahn's suggestion on shape design, I would recommend you using tiles. First, try to paint tiles in one specific value in order to get the biggest shapes in there. And then, you can focus on the transition between the tiles. Keep it up!! -Max

Hey there! Nice job! I recommend working on your shape design a bit more, you're mainly lacking hard edges. I recommend checking out @Sinix on youtube. It would definitely help you out :)

I think this is good, I would just spend more time with it if I were you. add some occlusion shadows in the areas that light can't reach (pit of the elbow), some details and so on. Good luck! :)