Critique please!
1yr
Jo Edgehill
Hello! I was hoping to get some feedback on this drawing I worked on a couple days ago. Next time I'm hoping to do something more dynamic,but this one was more about the rendering. Thank you for any help! :)
1yr
Hey @Jo Edgehill, nice to see you still sharing! I did a paintover emphasizing presentation and varying render levels. But to improve the actual skill of rendering you have to lock onto the forms of your subject- making sure they work naturally together in order to execute the lighting on top. You're pretty much there but I did have to make some design adjustments here and there in order render correctly.
Either way, keep up the good work!
Jo Edgehill
1yr
Thank you so much for everything! I really appreciate your time and help. Your draw over is incredible! I just have a question ,if that's okay? In your drawing , everything looks extremely cohesive and rendered. How do you know when everything fits together? I thought mine
was pretty good ,but after seeing yours,I can see it's all very disconnected. Thank you so much ,Mr. Sunga!
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For the rendering, you could probably play around with adding in more hard edges, and balancing soft and hard edges. (Sinix has some good videos that go into that if you’re interested). You do that a little bit though with the purple shading on the arm and ear, which I am a big fan of, love the color choice. Looks great. Also might be interesting to experiment with using some different brushes that aren’t as blurry.
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