Bird Painting
4yr
 Jason Arizona 
I drew a small painting of a bird. I'm not too keen on how it turned out. When i first concieved of the painting, I had a general, rough idea of how it would look, as far as composition and color. 
I decided to alter the composition, because it felt like more of a "professional" thing to do, and ended up with something I'm proud of, but not quite happy with. 
My question is, is it actually good this way? Should I redraw it from the top? What should I practice based on the flaws in this painting?