A redraw
2yr
Jo Edgehill
Hello! This is a redraw of my first post here,because I wanted to see how much I improved since then.I was originally critiqued by Steve Lenze ,and I hope I did a better job this time! Please let me know if you see anything that could be improved. Thank you! :)
2yr
Hey Jo,
Nice job on this! You are thinking about perspective now and it shows. The wrinkles you are designing work good too because they are helping with perspective and anatomy. You will notice in my notes that I mentioned adding some wrinkles to the front of the shirt. This is because it's lack of something there, makes it pop out as if something is missing.
Your drawing is really coming along well, keep it up :)
@tkmyrie
2yr
Nice redraw! however you can add some shadow underneath the jacket.
