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Shan Shan
added comment in2 Week Drawing Challenge
1yr
Day 1: Shaker bottle
In hindsight, I could have added a slight tilt to the bottles to add some dynamism. :o
Bella ciao!
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1yr
those are pretty darn good
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2yr
hi, I really like the colors, this reminds me of Akira Toriyama's later work. I think it could benefit from some more focus on the highlights. the light seems to be coming from at least 3 directions and it looks a bit unnatural. I would pick a single light source and base all the highlights from that, I also find that highlights pop more if you use them sparingly, maybe try using a different color besides white to highlight as well, it could look cool.
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2yr
Asked for help
Tried to incorporate different textures and shapes as a challenge, and definitely had fun! I’m not 100% satisfied with the results though, a bit worried some of them are too flat.
so glad draftsmen is back
I had forgotten how much I dislike Ethan Becker... thank you for reminding me!
2yr
the one at 32 minutes is my favorite
2yr
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have only done six so far but definitely feel like I improved each time I redid the apple. feel free to critique