Shan Shan
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4mo
Day 1: Shaker bottle
In hindsight, I could have added a slight tilt to the bottles to add some dynamism. :o
Bella ciao!

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4mo
those are pretty darn good
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5mo
hi, I really like the colors, this reminds me of Akira Toriyama's later work. I think it could benefit from some more focus on the highlights. the light seems to be coming from at least 3 directions and it looks a bit unnatural. I would pick a single light source and base all the highlights from that, I also find that highlights pop more if you use them sparingly, maybe try using a different color besides white to highlight as well, it could look cool.
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6mo
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Tried to incorporate different textures and shapes as a challenge, and definitely had fun! I’m not 100% satisfied with the results though, a bit worried some of them are too flat.
so glad draftsmen is back
I had forgotten how much I dislike Ethan Becker... thank you for reminding me!
8mo
the one at 32 minutes is my favorite
8mo
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have only done six so far but definitely feel like I improved each time I redid the apple. feel free to critique
8mo
This is great, I love the warm and cool tones in the fabric, the only thing that I noticed is that you made the rocks in the background really shiny which sort of takes away from the focal point of the woman.
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9mo
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32 little paintings. Each 5 minutes.
The mouth and nose clicked for me once I got through some of them. The ear pretty much stayed consistent and the eyes are a mess. Never really understood where I was going wrong with rendering the eyes. Maybe my process was off? No idea. Anyways, I'd love to get critique on that.
Thank you!
9mo
I think the problem with the eyes is that they look too flat. eyes are spheres that stick out of the head so they should be rendered like spheres so that it gives the illusion of form. I think out of your eyes the best one is the third one on the top, that definitely looks more 3 dimensional.
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9mo
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here are mine, the orange one looks a bit weird on the 25% side and im not really sure why
9mo
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Here is my assignment, I hope I did this correctly, any critiques about the rendering is appreciated!
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10mo
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This is from the bonus assignment. Rendering is really hard
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