How do these look? I'm having issues with the frontview, especially in Loomis and Bodem. What am I doing wrong?

Slowly getting better. I managed to get a contour perfectly. I'm also getting adjusted to the size of things and spacial awareness. I realised at the end that that I have to make everything flat, not try to give a 3dish effect.

I really struggled with this one. I couldn't get it looking close

I deleted the 3rd one by accident. What are you opinion on these?