Andrew Joseph Keith
Utah
Proko sculpting instructor. Sculpting takes drawing to a whole new dimension.
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JONGHAN PARK
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24d
added comment inCaricature Demo - Stan Prokopenko
I'm wondering about where to make a cut when making a bust. If i show chest, facial expression will lose focus, and if i cut it at the point where shoulders are bent, the corners will look sharp and anxious.
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7d
Looking great! I like seeing the structure at the beginning. I think I liked just the shoulders but it's really up to you what you think looks better. remember on the chest that the rib cage underneath is the primary form and the chest muscles and breast tissue sits on top of that rounded form. Right now it feels like the chest structure is a bit sunken in the middle if that makes sense. Keep up the great work!
Roger Dial
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20d
Asked for help
Here is a quick hair study I did for this assignment. I just used the simplified head I made from a previous assignment as a base for the hair.
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7d
Hey that's looking great! Super fun. It reminds me of comic book superman from the old comics for some reason. The back of the head might be able to use a bit more clay but other than that it's looking great and another great study.
Roger Dial
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19d
Asked for help
So it's time to sculpt a self-portrait. Here is a shot of my armature beginning and using a
Bodem block-in to build the side profile. I'm including a screen shot of the DaVinci Eye app with my photo over the top of the sculpt. Please critique. Thanks
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7d
Hey looking great! spot on! I'd say it's ready to move to the next stage of the process and start developing the structure of the skull. You might add a bit of clay on the back where it transitions to the shirt just to remind yourself that there is some mass there. Keep it up!
Maria Battista
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18d
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7d
Hey these are looking great! I'm loving the gesture of the thumb in these and the fingers and hand feel accurate. These might be some of my favorite student work from the hand course so far! Keep it up!
Viktors Dombrovskis
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17d
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7d
Nicely done! One thing that might be worth checking is the transition from the upper nose to the side of the cheek, its quite a bit softer than we usually realize and so there might be some mass that could be added there. Also the transition from the side view from the bottom of the nose to the upper part of the upper lip looks like it could be a bit fuller (about half way between the tip of the nose and the back of the wing of the nostril is where it usually ends up) Keep up the great work and It's great to see these!
Viktors Dombrovskis
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11d
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7d
Looking good! I might try to soften the transitions in some areas like the "y" shape on the inside of the ear looks a little to consistent in it's form throughout where there is usually some variation between thin and fat areas and soft hills transitioning to sharper ones if that makes sense. Keep it up!
@arminwidmann
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9d
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7d
Hey looking great! the palm might be a bit large which makes it look like a child's hand, idk if that's what your going for but other than that it looks great and I like the gesture studies! Keep it up!
@datyna
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8mo
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25d
Nicely done! on the first one I feel like the angle of the neck should be more pronounced like in the reference. The facial features also might be a bit large compared to the back of the head.
@omegafigures
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26d
Looking for critical feedback on how to improve my skull, if something looks off. Thanks.
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25d
details are looking good! the facial features feel a bit too large compared to the cranial mass of the back of the skull so I might check that. the mound of the mouth also feels very large compared to the size of the skull. Those are the things that jump out to me.
