@jasonpl4
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At first it was kinda overwhelming with how the obliques integrate with the rib cage and the pelvis along with the twisting and stuff. But by trying it over and over and watching the critiques video, I can draw a lot smoother and quicker. Really appreciate that.
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Really difficult task. Almost gave up on this assignment, but glad I finished. Any feedback is welcome
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2mo
I forgot posting this one. But looking back on my assignment, I think the sternal part on the skelly is a little bit too large. And also the pecs kind of feel like jelly. Maybe I have to bulk it up a little bit?
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2mo
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It is particularly hard to figure out how to draw the scapular in simplified forms. I did some corrections after the critique video.
It has been really helpful for me to spot my mistakes, but one thing I don't really understand is whether the clavicle can be lifted that high as the demonstration suggests in the #5. I tried to lifted my own shoulders and the clavicle seems to be barely moved.
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Here are some of my work. I found #3,5,8 are particularly hard to draw as the land marks are hidden and the poses are quite dynamic. Please give any advice if there's somewhere weird. Thank you.
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I did quite a few attempts before and after the critiques, here're some I feel confident with. The #14 is the hardest to draw so far b/c of the foreshortening. At the beginning it was pretty hard for me to grasp the shape of the pelvis and the proportion of the body. But after some practices and tips, I think they should be better. And in those exercises I made sure to pay attention to the perspective.
Though I think these drawings are good for now, I still want to know if there's anything I can improve on. Thank you.
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The first one (assignment #9) is particularly hard to trace. With the body being foreshortened, the pelvis being blocked, and a rotation occurred in the thoracic section.
I drew twice every image. I tried to fix especially the perspective of the head and pelvis and tried to make the flow of spine more accurate and dynamic. Though there's still room for improvement. Such as the cervical being too long in the last image.
If there is any feedback, it's welcome. Thanks.
5mo
I found this one is quite challenging due to my lack of understanding in the perspective. It took me 3 to 5 hours to finish this piece.
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Tried my best
5mo
Attempts before and after lessons. I didn't think the sphere was actually so hard to draw in three dimensional