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Tony Jung
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1yr
day 12. didnt want to study today so i just doodled.
this is the best one so far
Tony Jung
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1yr
Asked for help
Yes yes i was a bit late ;) ( took a long nap. )
well, its day 10 i think im doing great. I would like critiques so i can imporve on the bits im not good at + how my exaggerations are going on gesture drawings,
so any critiques are welcome and have a good day! (or night)
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1yr
I like that you're also including line quality exercises in your practice as that'll really strengthen your draftsmanship overall. I think you can benefit bringing in more variety into your linework for your gestures, too, both in shape and weight. Try pushing more straights and curves ('I's and 'C's) where you get the chance, emphasizing either a curving, stretching motion or a hard, squash quality. Line weight can also make a difference, varying it from thin to thick depending on where you see more mass or emphasis needed.
Tony Jung
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2yr
day 7 tried to exaggerate. i think i've got to do more.
it'll take a long time to get the hang of exaggerating, but i wont give up.
Tony Jung
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2yr
Asked for help
day 6 of gestures and beans. i would appreciate any critiques, im just trying to see if im going the right way.
thank you
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2yr
Hi! I looked through your past work for this course and you've shown some really great progress and dedication. I think something you could think about for your next session is how the weight is distributed on the model and conveying it through the gesture. Try emphasizing and exaggerating the figure towards where the weight lands e.g. on one side if their weight is mostly on one leg, if they are sitting down, leaning on their hand, etc. You may even temporarily think about the bean as a sack of flour affected by gravity for the purpose of this exercise. It can also help to incorporate some more straight lines, especially where the surface plane (like the floor) presses against the figure. Hope this helps and keep up the good work!