Niklas Nilsson
added comment inDrawing ‘Nicolai’
9mo
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Attempt #2 Much better than last one, but would love to hear your advice on more things to improve.

fischei
9mo
You really improved from first to second. I am not very experienced but I think to invest in your next drawing more time for accuracy in the proportions would help the likeness. For example the ear is to big and around the mouth something looks off.
Also my images improved (in my opinion) from more consistent tones of the shadows. The more even and less smudged it is the more polished it looks for my taste. Best regards
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2yr
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I am not sure how to add 'Help Request' to a post in a special lesson... so below I tried painting some eyes:
https://www.proko.com/s/9a2J
2yr
Hey there community,
first time I post something I have painted. I would really appreciate feedback regarding the four eyes below. I practiced to get the proportions right lately but struggle on shading shadows etc. I felt also very exhausted when I finished one of these (one to two hours). Any tips on this?
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2yr
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Hello! I drew 10 figures and... well. Time was really a problem, I guess I was still too focused on contour and proportions. I’ll try to do better tomorrow (when I practice again). All of them were 2min drawings, and I couldn’t complete one because I lacked enough space for it (dumb me, I should’ve drawn that on another page). Comparing the 1st to the last, I think I’ve gotten better :). I also attached some references here (sorry I couldn’t attach all of them, the maximum files I can add are 10). Thanks in advance for anyone who critiques my drawings.
2yr
because I also struggle a lot on it I have seen that your line quality could be improved. May be it helps to have this in mind when drawing. Strong confident lines...
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