JOSHUA ELEK
JOSHUA ELEK
@fefelix
Hi everyone! I've been practicing gesture for a while now and wanted to ask you what you think of these. Sometimes the poses are still falling apart and sometimes the gesture isn't quite there yet. But in general, would you say, these lines convey a sense of gesture and/or weight? What do you think could definitely be improved? What has helped you to understand gesture drawing better (beyond just doing gesture drawing and learning anatomy/ perspective and stuff)? Looking forward to your comments/critiques! Thanks in advance.
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JOSHUA ELEK
I aspire to be able to convey movement as well as these do. These are dynamic and incredibly easy to read. I would say the hard work has paid off - to me you clearly know how to do these gesture studies. I really don’t have any critical feedback, because I genuinely think these are well done. If you are looking for advice on things to do to stretch yourself, maybe try poses at different angles - try more poses that have a lot of foreshortening. Or try looking at a pose you have drawn here, and imagine rotating the camera up or down, side to side, and draw the pose from those angles using your imagination. Maybe even pick one pose, and try drawing that pose with the camera rotating 360 degrees around it. The other idea that might help you stretch a bit would be to try drawing gestures on a larger format. Grab some newsprint, and practice drawing larger versions, with a strong focus on drawing from your shoulder. Just ideas, you are light years beyond me, so take them for what they are worth.
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@julia_nedzynska
Thank you so much for the honorable mention! Unfortunately the art posted under my name in the results page is not mine... ^^' It should be this instead:
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JOSHUA ELEK
I LOVE those thumbnails!
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JOSHUA ELEK
Holy cow! I can’t believe it! This was really exciting, and a great experience overall!
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JOSHUA ELEK
I absolutely love the brush work, the selection of a square brush for those highlights worked really well. I don’t know if it is intentional, but the triangular shape of the water bag is very bossy for me, my eye is immediately drawn to that shape, and locks there. Then I look at the face, where it looks like the water is going into his nose. Maybe reduce the chin strap, and lower the hand so the water is more clearly aligned with the mouth. The disc shape on the right shoulder is larger than the disk shapes on the left shoulder. I think it should be smaller, as is it feels like it is breaking the perspective. The leather strap on the water bag is fabulous. I absolutely love the graceful swoop of that line. But the way the shadows are placed make it look like the strap inverts. Thinking of that line like a letter U, the left leg should be closer to the viewer, and the right leg should be further. At the top, this appears correct. But at the bottom, it looks like the left leg is suddenly further from the viewer than the right leg. I think it’s the shadow at the bottom of the loop that’s doing it. Finally, that nose - wow. I love the way the light hits it, and the shape of the bridge. The tone you chose for the side of the nose is perfect. I really genuinely like this, it tells a story, and is very easy to read, but it’s simultaneously packed with intricacy and painterly details that make me want to keep looking, hunting for more. Really well done
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Mary Beth Bellon
Hi, I used my own photography taken at Geneva Lake, the weather has been in the lower teens and dipping below zero making it unsutable for painting out. I loved the challenge of painting from photos and small. I used M Graham Gouache on cur Bristol board. Thank You for the challenge. Thinking that this might be perfect for a morning exercise.
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JOSHUA ELEK
I can almost hear the kids running around outside!
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Tracy Palermino
Credit for Photos from Unsplash: Randy Laybourne (upper left) Chris Montgomery (upper left recliner) Marc Olivier Jodoin (upper middle) Zoltan Tasi (upper right) Christopher Windus (lower left) Cédric Dhaenens (lower right)
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JOSHUA ELEK
Oh wow. So clean and tidy. Well done!
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Giacomo Sardelli
Hi everyone, here is my selection of 5 thumbnail for this month's challenge. I've painted with a limited palette of watercolors used as gouache by adding white gouache to them. The colours I've used are: - Yellow Ochre - Hansa Yellow - French Ultramarine - Phthalo Blue GS - Venetian Red - Sap Green Thank you for this challenge, it was great fun painting these and I've become much more confident in the process. All the reference photos were taken by me.
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JOSHUA ELEK
I have never added white gouache to watercolor before, but not I’m going to have to try it. These came out so well, I’m really impressed.
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honbeni
Hello everybody! I think I've never done thumbnails before (or maybe once but a long time ago?), so it was definitely a challenge. This challenge was very fun and I've definitely learned a lot and gained confidence through each thumbnail. As I'm mostly a line artist, painting was a challenge and I realised how important it is to be decisive about your brushstrokes to prevent wonky shapes. It was also nice to see how light and shadow help create depth and volume! And of course how light and very saturated color can attract one gaze. I'm definitely going to make more thumbnails in the futur :) My thumbnails were done digitally, using one main textured brush and a wet brush. Would loved to make them traditionnaly but I'm just getting used to watercolor and mixing colors, so...maybe next time! I've decided to go with the theme of the torii, as they are numerous out there in Japan, all different and sometimes in very surprising places! Decided to give each thumbnails at least a lady with an umbrella, as I found the repetition pretty fun. Now that I have more confidence, I believe next time I'll detach myself more from the reference and allow to play with much interesting colors! All the references photos come from unsplash! (I'm posting them below since only 10 pictures are allowed per post)
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JOSHUA ELEK
These are ridiculously good.
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JOSHUA ELEK
Here are my thumbnails. (The first image is my submission, the others are just my practice versions. I included them because I don’t have source photos.) I learned a TON by doing this. I got a much better handle on water control, and composition simplification by painting these thumbnails over and over until I was happy with the direction. I intended to paint landscapes reminiscent of scenes you might find in my home state of Ohio. In each scene I tried to incorporate a mix of lost and found edges to help evoke feelings of nostalgia and solitude. These are all watercolor on paper. (Daniel Smith pigments, and 140# cold press Arches paper.) These were painted with Escoda Reserva brushes sizes 4 and up. For each thumbnail, I used the same palette consisting of Carbazole Violet, Cerulean, Phthalo Blue, Cobalt Teal, Ultramarine Turquoise, Pyrrol Orange, Prussian Blue, Indanthrone Blue, Quinacridone Rose, Carmine, Raw Umber, Burnt Sienna, Hansa Yellow Light, and Quinopthalone Yellow.
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JOSHUA ELEK
Here are closeups of all five:
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Amy Riches
This was a really fun #prokochallenge and what better way to get to grips with my new ipad. So my  2"x2” thumbnails are all done digitally. I actually live in Iceland but have spent an extended holiday visiting my family in England, after a long time it was so nice to be back, so these thumbs are based on my own photos taken from my walks in the in the charming Lincolnshire countryside! It’s so beautiful and heartwarming returning to a familiar landscape, so it was fun to spend some time on these and really appreciate the area while I was there.
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JOSHUA ELEK
Wow - these are truly great. I especially like the thistles, it feels very calming.
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Mary Dolan
Thank you for this opportunity to observe my New Jersey neighborhood in gouache.
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JOSHUA ELEK
Those fire hydrants made me smile - this has nostalgia dripping from its pores!
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Orlando Flusband
This is my contribution to this month challenge. This has been a great exercise! I feel I have learned a lot already making these.
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JOSHUA ELEK
I’m impressed by how gestural your paintings are! I love these.
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JOSHUA ELEK
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@kitkitkit
5-ую еще отправлю я здесь первый раз
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JOSHUA ELEK
I love these. I struggle so much with clouds, and you really managed to capture the volume and reflective light in these thumbnails.
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Giacomo Sardelli
These are all my 20 attempts for this challenge. I was about to pick the best 5 of them, but it is my understanding by reading some comments that we are now allowed to post more than 5. The lesson notes say that we are supposed to submit 5 thumbnails, so I'm quite confused about the official submission request for this challenge. Anyway I hope you'll find these thumbnails interesting: a couple of them are duplicates because they didn't turn out as I wanted and I repainted them, they might be useful for who is stuck where I was!
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JOSHUA ELEK
It’s my understanding that you are supposed to do as many studies as you want, and paint (or pick) five for the final submission. This page is for posting in-progress images, in order to get feedback from the community. The five thumbnails that you want to have considered for the contest should be posted in the final submissions thread. (Link above.) I reread your post, and I think you knew this, but I’ll post my response here any way, in case it clarifies something for someone else.
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JOSHUA ELEK
I love the way your high key colors capture the bright summery mood of these landscapes!
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Zoungy Kligge
I updated my digital versions of the landscape thumbnails, with stronger contrast and chroma and resolution. I tried to keep very loose and work fast on this set without overthinking. All were done in one sitting from observation as the sun was setting at my house, and then updated from memory in a second sitting. It would be interesting to return to gouache on a third set. What do you think?
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JOSHUA ELEK
Man, the lighting in the first one is mesmerizing. I just love the way those trees in the back ground shine like fireflies. And the way you reduced contrast and muted the colors in the foreground really makes it feel like dawn/dusk.
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Donnie Lindsey
My first 5 attempts of 2"x2" landscape thumbnails. Photoshop. Reference images I took myself. Except the image on the top right.
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JOSHUA ELEK
Wow, you really nailed the lighting in these. The second one is difficult for me to interpret without the reference photo, maybe simplifying everything behind the white tree into one shape would help the tree stand out? Not sure. number one is my favorite, and I’m jealous of how well you captured the light on the fourth one. Well done!
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JOSHUA ELEK
Tomorrow, I will iterate on one of these for my third thumbnail, any suggestions on which one I should pursue?
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Urszula
Additional thumbnails painted with gouache from my imagination related to landscape.
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JOSHUA ELEK
Wow! These are so emotive! The aggressive lines and contrasting tones feel visceral and expressive! I love it. Landscapes so often feel trite and dreamy, but you have abstracted them and turned them into something like a landscape that’s ready for a fight. I love it. There is a risk that they have been abstracted to the point where they no longer read like landscapes, but I’m not sure how to fix that while maintaining the terse, scratchy style you have going.
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