Hi David,i made one layout from your script and one from my personal project.

Hi all! I made this drawing but somehow i could not get the lips right (and probably many other things :D ) please help me what do i do wrong? Thank you.

Hi everyone,here is my progress on ears,im not too satifyed with my shading here, im still constantly fail to make difference between shadow,halftone and reflected light in some pictures,i would appreciate any feedbacks and tips. Thank you.

Hi,here are my comic page layouts,for the first image i used the second page from David's scripts.Here i would choose the second sketch.For the second image i used David's third example script,here i choose the first sketch.For the third image i used my own script,here my choise is the first,or the fourth sketches. Here is my script: "Anh'blei(not final title)" - Karafa Roland PAGE 1: Six Panels Panel One: We open with an establishing shot of a big kingdom,its surrounded by huge unreachable mountains with only one entrance.The whole kingdom is having a cascading build,the highest place is the main square that is right before the castle.On the middle of the square there is a huge fountain with a statue,the whole square is looking stunning. Maludrin: Kea'l Siren,the Shield of Erosgul. Panel Two: We have a closer look at the Square and the castle with more focus on the square,we can see that there are many people on the square,it is some kind of a festival.This is a human kingdom,but we can see many kind of races on the streets enjoing the event. Maludrin: The people of Kea'l Siren are enyoing the DARKSTAR FESTIVE... Panel Three: The folks are enjoying the festival,some elf girl are dancing in the fountains water,there are also some children playing in the water. There are a couple standing in front of a vendors stand. Maludrin: And they have no idea... Panel Four: Here we have a closer look at the elf girl in the fountain,she is very attractive looking with a smile on her face as she dancing. Eronil: Let them celebrate, MALUDRIN. They deserve it. Panel Five: Now our focus is on the castle,its a huge building built on a big mountain's cliff wall. Its giant structure rises above us.From the square, big stairs leads to the castle entrance. Two guards protecting the entrance. Maludrin: As they deserve to KNOW that soon Kea'l Siren will PERISH! Panel Six: We move closer to the castle's entrance with the guards. Seredin: Not just Kea'l Siren,but all EROSGUL.

I made a few more lips before moving to the ears,hope its better than my first attempts.I would appreciate your feedbacks. Thank you. :)

Hi everyone,i finished the lips study but im not sure its good or bad,i would appreciate your feedbacks.

Hi everyone,i completed the nose study and i would appreciate your feedbacks.

Hi everyone. Here are my eye practise,a lot of times im having trouble to see the value and shapes( also im trying to get the hang of using studio paint). I would appreciate your feedbacks and tips. Thank you.

From 1 to 23 i used photos for reference,from 24 i made them from imagination 34 was an attemt to draw a baby. Your feedbacks are appreciated.