All three pears for 1st attempts before the demo and 2nd attempts after the demo. Unfortunately, I didn't realize until after that everything on the paper got smudged, especially for 1st attempts. Definitely needed work on shading and planes which I improved more on the second attempt, but need to start using the point of the pencils more for filling rather than the side of the pencils. Going to do a third attempt after watching the critique videos and have more patience with my shading, think I was going too quickly and not taking my time.

I feel like I'm starting to get it a lot more! Don't love the shadow under the pear but I think I could've improved it with more page space. Any critiques are welcome!

After watching the video...

I'm waiting for a bigger sketchbook to be delivered

This is an exercise before watching the Video...

I tried another pear after watching the video, I improved from my first attempt. Any feedback is appreciated! :)

Before(L) and after(R) demo

I only have 2hb and a 3h pencils I don't know if that matters. Mr. Prokopenko kept switching between pencils that I don't have.

2nd attemp at pear #1 after watching the demo. Would appreciate a feedback!

Step 1

My first attempt - I think I am going to start by investing in more pencils, and practicing the shading a lot more. Any more suggestions???

second attempt on left, along with my first attempt (which i also posted on the initial lesson) for comparison purposes against the second attempt after watching this lesson. i used pear 2 looking at it here, i can see that i'm not capturing the leftward lean properly

This is the 2nd attempt. Please share feedback to improve.

Done with shading

Here's my first shot at it!

My pear drawing

i choose to do pear 2 after watching your demo i didnt want to copy the same one. Critiqs pls

Redo.a year later