Working on vehicles, illustration composition and values.
14d
Elvis Murray
Hey guys, what are some things that i could do to improve my vehicles? What are some things that i could do to make the composition more interesting? Thanks in advance, hope everyone's having a good 2022 so far!
MSLRPNG
Reply or ask for help
Drop images here to attach them to the message
All posts
Newest
mi_milo
Use a dfferent color for the skye than for the explosion. The explosion will come out better that way
Write reply...
Drop images here to attach them to the message
Steve Lenze
Hey Elvis, The thing I notice the most is that every element in the composition is separate from all the others. The tank, guy, mountains, wall and sky all take up their own space. This flattens the composition and makes it look like nothing is relating to anything else. This is why we want to overlap the elements in our compositions so that it gives it depth. I did a quick diagram of your painting to show you what I mean. I hope it makes sense to you and is helpful :)
tank
Write reply...
Drop images here to attach them to the message
Elvis Murray
This was very helpful! Thank you very much!
Reply