Traveling Musician redraw
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Jo Edgehill
This is a redraw of my last post,after being critiqued by some very talented artists.Hopefully I interpreted their suggestions correctly! Please let me know if you see anything I could fix! Thank you :)
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Luigi Manese
Definitely looking a lot more solid overall! It's awesome to see how many different critiques you've applied to your updated piece.
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Jo Edgehill
Thank you! I appreciate your help especially :)
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Steve Lenze
Yeah, the figure looks so much more balanced, good job!
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Jo Edgehill
Thank you,Sir! I appreciate your help! :)
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ehmaple
What a very expressive design! The colour, an clothing style and accessories all help build to a fun, carefree music-loving character. I would say be more consistent with the line work. Some areas have bold dark line art while other areas (excluding the shading) have soft to no line art. If you are working with an art program that provides layers, separate the line art into its own layer. If not, you can always go over the painting again with lineart
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Jo Edgehill
First of all,thank you for the compliments! Second ,I totally messed up on most of the lineart haha. I'll try to keep it more consistent from now on, thank you for pointing that out!
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