study of a stan propenko drawing
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Elson sunshine
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Wow, Elson, I really love this drawing. Very dimensional!
Elson sunshine
2yr
Thanks
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Hey Elson! Great job on this, I can definitely tell it's a study of Stan's. The anatomy, edges, proportion and gesture are getting there.
What I would say is to focus on trying to understand the forms and how they're moving in space. Right now it feels like more of a copy of someone else's drawing rather than interpreting those shapes in 3D space. What I mean is it feels sort of flat. You did a good job placing everything, but it doesn't feel like you understand the underlying anatomy yet.
For example, his left scapula and how it relates to his traps/ deltoid is correct enough for me to understand what's going on when looking at the entire drawing. When I zoom in though, it doesn't really feel like a shoulder. If you were to really try to nail down where things insert/ how the traps sit on the scapula it would do a lot for making it look more 3D and allowing you to interpret that information yourself.
Hope this helps!