Searching for feedbacks on a work in progress
3mo
Francesco Crobu
I'm working on this character design. The intention was to create a slightly distorted perspective in order to give the character more grotesque shapes, but I'm not sure if it's working. What am I doing wrong?
The character still needs to be rendered, but I want to make sure the shape is functional first.
The prompt for this character is a Crazy Bluesman who could fit well in a Southern Gothic context.
Thank you for your attention and any advice.
3mo
Focusing on the clothing, I feel like you have too much complication, it's too over done.
Wrinkles and folds need to follow the concept of stretch and pinch/tension. One side needs to be simple and the other side complex, because when everything is complex, it confuses the eye.
I did a quick sketch that I hope helps :)
Francesco Crobu
3mo
Thank you very much, Steve! Yes, maybe I should study drapery better. I will try to make the adjustments you suggested.
